Omkara
“I have no spur / to prick the sides of my intent, but only / vaulting ambition, which overleaps itself.”
-William Shakespeare, Macbeth I.7
[Warning: possible spoilers]
Given the rave reviews that Vishal Bharadwaj’s Omkara has been getting everywhere I look (see here and here and here) I can’t help adding my dissenting voice. Not that I disagree that Bharadwaj is an extremely promising director. But watching Omkara, I came away with the same impression I had watching Maqbool – I wish he’d leave Shakespeare alone. One admires his ambition, but one can’t help feeling that he’s overleaping himself a little.
First the good bits. Omkara features some seriously good acting. Konkona Sen Sharma’s justly acclaimed performance as a down to earth village wife has to be seen to be believed, and Saif Ali Khan is astonishingly good – projecting an uncouthness and a sense of barely suppressed violence that one didn’t think he was capable of. The other performances don’t come close, frankly, but they succeed because the actors are well cast. Ajay Devgan broods and looks intense (which, let’s face it, is all that he can do) but it works because he’s Othello [1]. Kareena Kapoor giggles and simpers and gets all silly and tearful, but this makes for a surprisingly convincing Desdemona. And Vivek Oberoi already has enough practise playing the loyal second in command expelled from his master’s good graces from his Company days to play the honourable Cassio with aplomb.
But more than that, Bharadwaj is a genuinely interesting director. Many of the scenes in Omkara are exquisitely executed – the violence is explosive, the framing innovative, the dialogue crisp. Most importantly, Bharadwaj understands the power of suggestion, and is willing to trust the imagination of his audience the way few directors working in Bollywood are. Take the scene where Emilia reveals Iago’s plot to Othello. The entire dialogue consists of a single line where Emilia tells Othello that it was she who stole the family cummerbund from Desdemona, not Desdemona who gave it to Cassio. All the other revelations that must doubtless follow are simply implied, and the next scene shows Othello confronting Iago with the truth.
Where the movie fails, I think, is in pandering too much to popular taste. It’s not just the excruciatingly dull, stock-in-trade item numbers (and yes, that’s item numbers, plural) or the insufferably soppy scenes showing you Othello and Desdemona’s trite home life, or the entirely unnecessary sex scenes whose only purpose, so far as I can see, is to draw whistles of approval from the front rows. It’s also the fact that Bharadwaj, either unable to replicate the intensity of Shakespeare’s dialogue, or unwilling to trust the focus of the play, chooses to include a rambling sub-plot about political violence, presumably so that he can add a whole host of violent action scenes that will keep his audience happy. So instead of getting a pure study of one man’s descent into mistrust and jealousy, you get an Othello who runs off in the middle of his domestic crisis to assassinate his mentor’s political rivals or help figure out how the next election is to be won.
To his credit, Bharadwaj weaves the two stories together very well, but the sub-plot is distracting in two ways – first, it dilutes the drive of Shakespeare’s story by involving the audience in an unnecessary side tale, which has no real bearing on the central plot; and second, it destroys much of the impact of the denouement. In the play, Othello’s fall is a terrible one precisely because he is a noble and virtuous man, reputed for his judgement and fairness – for such a man to be duped into killing his wife is shocking indeed. For some half-savage bandit, steeped in machismo and immured to violence to kill his wife is much less of a surprise. Desdemona may be shocked when her beloved Othello hits her, but given that this is a two-bit political goon we’re talking about, is anyone else really surprised that he turns out to be a wife-beater [2]?
Overall then, if Bharadwaj really wants to make intelligent cinema, I think he’d do better to have the courage of his convictions and dispense with all these hackneyed cliches. It’s hard to take a film maker seriously when he doesn’t have the guts to let twenty minutes pass in his film without throwing in either some sleaze or some violence, even though neither is really required.
The real problem with Omkara, though, is with the script. Bharadwaj may have followed the details of Shakespeare’s play quite faithfully, but he completely misses, in my opinion, its underlying logic. As a result, his Iago has all the villainy and slyness of Shakespeare’s original, with little or nothing of his magnificence.
There’s the issue of control, for instance. Shakespeare’s Iago is a puppet-master, a manipulative mastermind whose traps are foolproof and inescapable. Bhardwaj’s Iago takes opportunity when he sees it, but his is a low cunning and he owes his eventual success as much to luck as to intelligence. Shakespeare’s Iago ensures that Cassio’s drunken state will get him fired by telling Montano that Cassio is a drunkard, thus deliberately ensuring that Montano will try to stop Cassio and the two will fight and that, in what follows, Montano will denounce Cassio as being unworthy of his post. Bharadwaj’s Iago just gets Cassio drunk and drives him into a brawl, presumably hoping he’ll hit the wrong person. Shakespeare’s Iago deliberately brings Othello back to Desdemona at a time when he knows that Cassio will be with her. Bharadwaj’s Iago doesn’t determine when Othello and he will return, it just happens that when they do Cassio is with Desdemona, and Iago is clever enough to use this to his advantage. Shakespeare’s Iago cleverly stage manages the scene where Cassio scoffs at Bianca, so that Othello sees how Cassio laughs and sneers but doesn’t actually hear what Cassio is talking about. Bharadwaj’s Iago simply holds a cell phone up to Othello’s ear and (presumably) hopes that what Cassio says will lend itself to the interpretation that he is talking about Desdemona. Shakespeare’s Iago is a professional, Bharadwaj’s Iago is an amateur.
Next, there’s the issue of motivation. When Shakespeare’s play opens, Iago has already been passed over for the post of Othello’s Lieutenant, which is the immediate justification given for his betrayal of the secret of Desdemona’s flight to her father. Bharadwaj’s Iago also starts the film by warning Rodrigo and letting him escape to warn Desdemona’s father, but at this point he has no reason to be anything but loyal to Othello. Why does he do it then? In the play, Iago’s hatred of Othello is omnipresent and elemental – a number of reasons are given or implied for it: Othello’s choice of Cassio as second in command, Iago’s suspicions about Othello and his wife, racial hatred, envy – but mostly it simply exists, and is the chief basis on which Iago defines himself as a character. Shakespeare’s Iago is convincing precisely because his hatred of Othello is a fact of nature, a sort of personified bigotry, a racial loathing, not something induced by any particular event or situation. Not so with Bharadwaj’s Iago, who seems fairly devoted to Othello to begin with, even assisting him in an initial fight (if he hated Othello so much, and wanted his job, why not just shoot Othello in the confusion?), and whose entire urge to destroy Othello seems to stem only from being passed over as second in command. That anyone would conceive so malignant an antipathy simply because he didn’t get picked to be the next in line strains credulity a bit, and, more importantly, completely changes the meaning of Iago’s character in the story.
Bharadwaj’s Iago is also a far more sympathetic character than his Shakespearan counterpart. Shakespeare’s Iago is an out and out villain, who kills Rodrigo because he has been taking jewels from him under the guise of passing them on to Desdemona and cannot let Rodrigo live for fear of discovery (this also suggest, of course, that Othello’s choice of Cassio may well have been justified). When his plans are finally revealed, Shakespeare’s Iago murders his own wife and tries to escape. By contrast, Bharadwaj’s Iago has a kind of honour – one could argue that he is entirely justified in feeling wronged, and that, when the time comes, he has no fear of death, being content to see his evil purpose bear fruit.
Finally, there’s the question of Othello’s motivation. In the play, it’s easy to see why Othello so easily falls prey to suspicion. His jealousy is physical and aesthetic – he is a Moor after all, and for someone like Desdemona to fall in love with him is unheard of. Cassio, by contrast, is a good-looking nobleman, precisely the kind of man that girls like Desdemona are brought up to admire. Othello’s status as an outsider, as the Moor, is what makes Desdemona’s father oppose the match in the first place, and is the reason he remains insecure about his wife’s affections, falling easy prey to Iago’s slander.
In Bharadwaj’s movie, the cause for Othello’s insecurity is a little less clear. Desdemona’s father opposes Othello because he is the son of a mixed-caste marriage of some sort, and therefore not an entirely kosher member of the community. But it’s hard to believe that this is the reason Othello thinks Desdemona chooses Cassio over him, and certainly nothing in the movie suggests so.
There is another reason why Othello might doubt Desdemona’s fidelity, one that Bharadwaj, strangely enough, sets up but then never really develops. Desdemona and Cassio were both together in college – they are educated, ‘city’ people, where Othello is little more than a rural bumpkin. Iago actually alludes to Desdemona and Cassio’s time together in college once, but I can’t help feeling that this is point that Bharadwaj could have pursued much further. A few scenes of Cassio and Desdemona reminiscing about city / college life, or laughing at Othello because of things he didn’t understand / hadn’t read, would, I think, have gone a long way in making this a more interesting adaptation.
As it is, I found myself puzzled by why Othello is so ready to disbelieve Desdemona’s fidelity. Bharadwaj gives us only Desdemona’s father’s statement about how a girl who would betray her father can never be faithful to anyone else, but this hardly seems convincing. Hasn’t our local Othello seen any Hindi movies? Doesn’t he know that going against your family’s wishes to marry the man of your dreams is a time honoured tradition? That a woman who would lie to her father cannot be faithful to her husband seems a particularly illogical argument, and hardly cause enough to justify Othello’s complete lack of faith in his wife.
The fact that the reasons for Othello’s jealousy remain somewhat obscure points to what is, in my opinion, the final flaw in Bharadwaj’s adaptation. Because Bharadwaj is enamoured with his tough-talking, expletive snarling ruffians (and I must confess I find Shakespeare easier to follow than some of the dialect in the film) we lose the rich inwardness of Shakespeare’s characters. Not only is the logic of the situation that makes Othello the play it is obscured in the movie, but the intense interest in the characters themselves, the genius of Shakespeare in laying bare their thought processes, especially the slow degrees by which they arrive at their final roles, is largely lost. What is, in Shakespeare, an exploration of the fine gradations of suspicion, becomes, in the film, a simple statement of fact – because the film is almost anti-verbal, the thoughts of its key players are little explored.
Bottomline: Omkara is one of the best movies to come out of Bollywood that I’ve seen in a long time. It has some excellent acting, some wonderful scenes, and if you manage to stay awake through the item numbers [3] and the scenes of domestic bliss in the first half, you may actually manage to enjoy yourself. But as an adaptation of Othello it’s a lackluster work. For all the things it gets right, it just isn’t Shakespeare.
[1] Throughout this post, I’m going to use the Shakespearan names, and not bother with what the characters were called in the movie. Frankly, I don’t remember.
[2] On a separate note, did anyone figure out what she saw in the guy anyway? I mean, in the play we know why Desdemona loves Othello – a) he’s a noble and courageous lord, and b) he’s lived an exciting life and she’s charmed by the stories of his great adventures. But in the movie Othello is a killer and a thug and I’m wondering why she wanted to be his wife.
[3] I didn’t. When I drifted off to sleep, what’s-her-name was gyrating away in a room full of extras who’d been given police uniforms and told to act lecherous. When I woke up there was a lot of shooting going on and some guy had just died.
August 1, 2006 at 3:25 am
Falstaff, fine review.
(Minor correction, though: it isn’t Bharadwaj, it’s Bhardwaj, according to the official site: http://www.omkarathefilm.com/)
August 1, 2006 at 3:50 am
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August 1, 2006 at 7:58 am
i totally agree with u that the calibre vishal has shown by directing Shakespeare’s othello in such an interesting and aweful way is Commendable.
this type of Indian cinema is showing world that we are no longer making tree romance stories but we too have calibre and aptitude for gud films
regards,
pujaraina
August 1, 2006 at 8:28 am
I second you.
Disappointing, to say the least
August 1, 2006 at 1:24 pm
Some very supremely valid points made there. Awesome post and yes, my verdict on the movie isn’t much different from yours. Omkara’s better than all the synthetic pukeworthy stew that Bollywood’s ejecting nowadays, but in no-way a masterpiece as its hailed out there.
Keep writing!
August 2, 2006 at 12:02 am
i found ajay devgan pallid and stiff in comparison to saif. and though the song picturisations had their moments, they were largely trite. my favourite moment comeles early in the film when, just as omkara is moving towards dolly, her father’s car slides in between them and through the dark window on the far side, you see dolly, almost in shadow.
and i though saif’s sidekick, whatzisname, was very good! what was it with the very gay overtones to that relationship?!
August 2, 2006 at 12:36 am
I think you are being too hard on Bharadwaj looking for a ditto of Shakesphere. It is merely an adaptation and a clever one at that. Ditto for Maqbool. Each person is allowed to adapt differently, if you were to make a film, you;d do it differently!
and if he would have copied each and everything…it would hardly be an adaptation, it would be a copy!
As long as he has te basic elements in place, I dont see why he should be the victim of judgement from someone who understands Shakespere only too well
August 2, 2006 at 2:33 am
but then there is no logic for love, perhaps
Bharadwaj’s Desdemona loves the fact that her Othello is a thug (which brings me to a nagging qustion- why Kareena of all the ppl in Bollywood??)
August 4, 2006 at 2:23 am
Falstaff, I’m disappointed. You review an audio-visual experience by comparison to the written word. Doesn’t fly.
The cinematography is very good and some parts of it are technically stunning (think of the seamless shot of Devgan and Kareena cavorting at home, or the grimy finish of the shots where they shoot the guy on the train). Even the sound design is restrained (though only by Bollywood standards) and the screenplay – as you point out – does not ramble.
I agree with you about the gaps in the plot, that the screen Iago is an opportunist rather than a grand schemer, but perhaps that fits in better with the milieu. After all, this is heartland goons rather than the nobility.
I liked the film. A great deal.
At the end of it, I also liked your review. Damn!
J.A.P.
August 4, 2006 at 9:50 am
Swathi,
Who would you rather have had? Ameesha Patel??
August 4, 2006 at 3:29 pm
Amit: *slaps forehead in disgust with himself* I did it again, didn’t I? My bad. I would change it now, but it’s too much work. On the bright side, at least I’m spelling your name right.
Puja: Quite. Such an interesting and aweful comment.
Nazim: Thanks
Karana23: Thanks.
space bar: Yes, I should have mentioned him – he was quite good. Frankly the Iago / Rodrigo conversations were among the finest bits in the movie. Devgan was stiff and pallid, but frankly, I’d say that in the play Othello is way more stiff and pallid than Iago – which is why I thought Devgan as Othello wasn’t that bad a casting choice.
Chandni: Fair enough. It’s certainly true that it’s hard for me to be objective about adaptations of Shakespeare.
That said, there are certainly adaptations of Shakespeare out there that I entirely love – the best example I can think of is Kurosawa’s Ran, which, for me captures the emotional power of the Shakespeare original brilliantly, even as it sets the play in an entirely different context and deviates quite substantially from the text. If anything, I’d say Ran almost improves on Shakespeare. And it’s not true that an adaptation that carefully swears by the logic of the original has to be a copy. Take Kurosawa’s other Shakespeare adaptation – Throne of Blood. That’s a version of Macbeth too. It sticks fairly closely to the text, but it’s a mesmerising film nonetheless. If you want to know why I have such a low opinion of Maqbool, just watch it back to back with Throne of Blood. You’ll see why I’m unimpressed with Bhardwaj.
Just to be clear, I’m not opposed to creative adaptations of Shakespeare – in a completely different context, some of my favourite books are the novels of Iris Murdoch where she riffs off Shakespeare. My grouse with Bhardwaj isn’t that he deviates from Shakespeare, my grouse is that he deviates from Shakespeare in ways that make the story, in my opinion, much less interesting and / or logical.
(Admittedly, comparing someone to Kurosawa is being a little hard on them, but I’m reacting to the fact that people – yes, Jai, this means you – have been going around describing Omkara as brilliant. I think it’s above average, even fairly good, but nowhere near brilliant)
Swathi: True. But that’s also a convenient excuse for bad writing, isn’t it? And as Marauder’s Map suggests – who else would you have picked for the role?
August 5, 2006 at 10:30 pm
J.A.P.: I agree with you about the cinematography, though not about the sound design, I thought the music was extremely intrusive. And the screenplay does ramble – the movie could easily have been at least a half hour shorter without losing anything essential – all these intensely silly item numbers and painfully protracted ‘relationship’ scenes.
I think part of the problem is that I hardly ever watch Bollywood movies, so that I’m emphatically not applying Bollywood standards to this. I’m perfectly willing to believe that Omkara is far superior to your regular Bollywood potboiler, but I haven’t seen any of those movies, so my benchmarks are very different.
Having said that, it’s not just about comparison to the written word. Forget for a moment that Othello exists (hard as that is for me to do). Does the screenplay really make sense on its own? What is Langda’s motivation – just that he got passed over for the second in command? And how does that explain his helping the groom initially? Why does Omkara believe him so easily? And connections to Othello aside, why is this an interesting story? What’s so magnificent about a villain who is opportunistic and gets lucky? Why am I supposed to feel moved by the death of a woman who chooses to get together with some thug and is then ’surprised’ when he turns out to be violent and not particularly bright? Why is this Cassio dude going around looking like a wounded puppy and generally trying extra hard to please when he already knows that Omkara has promised to reinstate him in a couple of weeks? (another deviation from the play, btw) Where’s the pathos here? Where’s the sense of dramatic inevitability? Why is this a tragedy and not just a sordid and fairly protracted tale of some fairly dim and extremely uncouth characters killing each other off, and good riddance?
August 6, 2006 at 3:09 am
Omkara – India’s Othello…
I have been waiting for this movie for a while now. Vishal Bhardwaj’s Omkara – a take on Shakespeare’s Othello has Ajay Devgan (Othello), Vivek Oberoi (Cassio), Saif Ali Khan (Iago), Konkona Sen (Emilia), Kareena Kapoor (Desdemona), Deepak …
August 10, 2006 at 2:54 pm
Very nice review indeed.
I was thinking of writing one myself but this one takes care of most of my objections. (Don’t get me wrong, I loved the movie)
One thing that I had problem with was the ending. I thought the buildup to the end was good but the ending was not as powerful as “Cape Fear” or “Shawshank Redemption” or “Khaki” or “Ek Hasina thi”.
I would have liked the ending to be something like …
Omkara makes Kesu the nexy bahubali and asks everyone to leave. Then he lies next to Dolly, continues his song, and in the middle of it shoots himself.
August 11, 2006 at 2:41 am
But Omkara is brilliant! And so will Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna be. As you say, your benchmarks are different…
August 12, 2006 at 1:06 am
I too believe that the movie is just short of another senseless bollywood flick without its relation to the Shakespearen play. I had gone to watch the movie solely based on the fact that its an adaptation of Othello, however, I was thoroughly disappointed to watch how selective the director has been in this process. The fact the the movie is tagged as being an adaptation of Othello is its only basis for credibility – without it, it’s truly senseless – motivation is lacking through and through and one is forced to relate the events to reasons foretold by Shakspeare.
Nevertheless, for bollywood, it’s an icebreaker! (if thats any consolation!)
August 19, 2006 at 7:07 am
Wonderful review, but I must confess I find Shakespeare easier to follow than some of the dialect in the film says it all. Fellow cinephile, wait for a well-translated DVD or cooperative pal to translate this refreshingly unHindi film. This is a magnificent script, and while it meanders from Othello considerably, manages to stand up excitingly on its own. I agree with the lack-of-motivation objection — for both Iago and Othello — but while those might be character flaws, the film itself coasts along without them.
Points of view are all very well, but if you don’t remember the name of Billo Chaman Bahar in the one of the most technically clever films this year [the use of the soundtrack is brilliant -- please tell me you paid attention to lyric?] it’s a bit of a travesty.
Re-view, perhaps?
August 25, 2006 at 2:55 pm
It’s funny that you mention this issue w/ motivation for Lagda and Omkara in Bhardwaj’s Othello. Because the question of motivation has always been my problem w/ Shakespeare’s Othello. I’ve never been convinced of both Othello’s lack of insight into Iago (and Desdomona), and Iago’s evilness/ duplicity.
In contrast, I found Omkara and Lagda’s motivations far more convincing. The liberties that Bhardwaj does take (which aren’t that many) firms up the story in wonderful ways. As just one example, the flaw you point to–the passing over the general post bit (what a great scene!). By showing Lagda involved in back-stabbing well before any direct causes, reveals something inherently wrong with him. The subplots in the movie also work to set up (beautifully, I thought) the power dynamics of this group and why Lagda might not just shoot Othello. His wife is Omkara’s sister, he has a child.
Also Saif Ali Khan and Nasurredin Shah’s performances. Wow. I’ve always chalked up Saif as someone I could rest my eyes on, but who cannot act. But no longer.
Anyway, you raise some interesting flaws, all I of which I respectfully disagree w/ completely:)
August 30, 2006 at 8:40 am
Wow, great review. Especially since I agreed with many of your observations, including the intrusive music, spectacular cinematography, flashes of brilliance in acting and overall not-so-fabolousness. Thanks for not joining the chorus of ‘behold, great movie’.
But perhaps you are imposing a somewhat unfair standard of judgement when you start expecting character studies comparable to shakespeare from what is after all a bollywood blockbuster, and as such has to conform to certain genre-defining characteristics. Drawing a musical analogy, it would be like complaining that what salil chowdhury did with the mozart 40 theme in ‘itna na mujhse’ doesn’t stand up to the development in the original.
And regarding the film’s fidelity in following the play, it needs to be remembered that the director is making it for his own audience, not Shakespeare’s, and that is what rightly determines his artistic choices.
February 27, 2008 at 3:08 am
Not just awesome a very intelligent review!